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Gothic Angel by Clovis-thecutestcat Gothic Angel by Clovis-thecutestcat
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I would like to start by noting how amazing the arm on the right is. I would like to note that the other hand is rather nice too, however, I think I bit more contrast would make it pop; I had to take a moment to search for it and figure out the figure. The creases and folds on the dress are Glorious. The dress is actually my favorite part of this picture: It shows that you put a lot of heart and thought into it. The shading is spot-on, however, the contrast issue arises again for me. I feel like there is a level of dark gray that is missing. I like how you used cross-hatching to incorporate texture and lighting: That is very important in a traditional piece. I'm not sure what happened on the bottom left-hand corner with the hatching and dress, but it seems to me like you are trying to express a darkness there, with a light source coming from the top right-hand corner. Summing this up, the piece is strong overall, my main concern is, again, the contrast. Here are some tutorials I think may aid you:
www.deviantart.com/art/Cross-h…
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ieelleme Featured By Owner Jul 21, 2014  Student General Artist
Hello :meow: This deviation was submitted into the FriendHunt Critique Folder. 
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Clovis-thecutestcat Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I would really appreciate a critique for this drawing :)
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ieelleme Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014  Student General Artist
Noted :D 
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BartStarSuperStar Featured By Owner Jul 20, 2014  Student General Artist
Omg how do you draw eyes? (If you don't mind me asking)
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Clovis-thecutestcat Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Uh I do the outline...color in a dark dot and then kind of scribble around it...^^; simple
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Shinseinasenshi Featured By Owner Jun 30, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
50min? 0_o lol wow.
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emokitten687 Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Omg! It's Suigintou! She's my favorite character from Rozen Maiden. :D :la: Nice drawing. ^_^
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Clovis-thecutestcat Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
aw that's nice ;p haha thanks ^^;
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Demon57 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
She's adorable and beautiful.
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BigKev24 Featured By Owner Jun 19, 2014   Artist
That's awesome!
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